A great improvement over the other episodes.
There's quite some artistic dissonance between several of the art styles you used for the characters, and the writing could be better.
The alternating between voice overs and text is done sort of haphazardly, but is forgivable.
I suggest that Black learns how to do drunken boxing legitimately. It would be awesome.
Look up Hyun's "Drunken Stick" if you haven't. It's on here too, and it's awesome. I think Black would benefit from an upgrade, after 7 episodes of nil. Maybe get him drunk to make it kick in?